Well done for completing yet another SLJ activity! I'm really impressed by your hotel and am happy to see you've drawn it up yourself. It's great that your hotel is colourful and made out of brick— it would be an incredibly strong hotel. Where is your hotel going to be built? What do you mean when you say that you're "inside the mirror poking out of the window"?
Hi Mehakpreet, I like how you put yourself in the window. I also like how you used lots of bright colours in the curtains. But maybe net time you could say where you would build it.
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Kia Ora Mehakpreet,
ReplyDeleteWell done for completing yet another SLJ activity! I'm really impressed by your hotel and am happy to see you've drawn it up yourself. It's great that your hotel is colourful and made out of brick— it would be an incredibly strong hotel. Where is your hotel going to be built?
What do you mean when you say that you're "inside the mirror poking out of the window"?
I look forward to your response!
Cheers
Jordan
Hi Mehakpreet,
ReplyDeleteI like how you put yourself in the window. I also like how you used lots of bright colours in the curtains. But maybe net time you could say where you would build it.
Keep on blogging
Sam