Well done for completing yet another SLJ activity— I love your presentation for this activity and I really like your New Zealand flag, too. I'm glad to hear you say that you've had the pleasure of staying in New Zealand— it is a really useful way to start the sentence topic. What do you mean when you say that all of the "singers, actors, new music, new devices, new school and new stuff is all going to go"? Is something happening to New Zealand in your story? I think it's hilarious that you said "you will always have Australia"— so well done for adding some humour to your post.
Hi Mehakpreet, I love your post. I like how you said 'you will always have Australia' it adds great personality. I like the presentation of the note like the background and the New Zealand flag is on point. I like all the descriptive langue.
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Hey Mehakpreet,
ReplyDeleteWell done for completing yet another SLJ activity— I love your presentation for this activity and I really like your New Zealand flag, too. I'm glad to hear you say that you've had the pleasure of staying in New Zealand— it is a really useful way to start the sentence topic. What do you mean when you say that all of the "singers, actors, new music, new devices, new school and new stuff is all going to go"? Is something happening to New Zealand in your story?
I think it's hilarious that you said "you will always have Australia"— so well done for adding some humour to your post.
Keep up the great work!
Cheers
Jordan
Hi Mehakpreet,
ReplyDeleteI love your post. I like how you said 'you will always have Australia' it adds great personality. I like the presentation of the note like the background and the New Zealand flag is on point. I like all the descriptive langue.
Sam