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Sunday 23 December 2018

SLJ My favorite chocolate


I wrote about my favorite chocolate because I really like chocolate but I only get it once a week or noun if I get 1 from school it is okay.  My parents don't want me eating sugar like chocolate or lollies so when I get older I won't have to eat medication for sugar.
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  1. Anonymous30 December 2018 at 13:42

    Nice work I think it was good how you explained how it feels on the outside and the inside. My favouite choclate will proablly be the dream white choclate.

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