My feeling would be in China or Beiijng
I would be terrified teeth chattering and wind blowing
I would be trying to get the nice air and trying to be fair with other people
I would be Grateful for what I got because it might keep me alive
I would stay indoors to be safe around the bad air
This is my feelings for the bad air in China or Beijing
Kia Ora Mehakpreet,
ReplyDeleteWell done for finishing this Summer Learning Journey activity, 'The Sky in Shanghai' and for writing a little poem about how you feel about travelling to Beijing, China.
I like the descriptive language that you've used in the first line: 'terrified, teeth chattering and wind blowing' — well done, this really helps your readers to understand that you're not very comfortable with being in Beijing.
When you say that you're trying to be fair with other people, I wonder what you mean? Do you mean fair, as in to be sharing the nice air with them?
It's nice that you can keep your gratitude for what you do have, isn't it? We are very lucky to live in a country that doesn't suffer from the same level of pollution as China.
I look forward to reading your other posts!
Cheers,
Jordan