Well done for completing this SLJ activity, 'Burning Up' and for creating a graph to showcase the different temperatures in these four places. Maybe you can add where these places are in the world, for example 'Dasht-e Loot' is in (Iran). Also, don't forget to add the units to either side of the graph— for instance we would say that the left side of your graph would be the unit of °C. I really like the colour scheme that you've picked for this— it's awesome!
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Kia Ora Mehakpreet,
ReplyDeleteWell done for completing this SLJ activity, 'Burning Up' and for creating a graph to showcase the different temperatures in these four places. Maybe you can add where these places are in the world, for example 'Dasht-e Loot' is in (Iran). Also, don't forget to add the units to either side of the graph— for instance we would say that the left side of your graph would be the unit of °C.
I really like the colour scheme that you've picked for this— it's awesome!
Cheers,
Jordan