Hi Mehakpeet, I like the detail you put into your work. Wow who new the Condor was so interesting. Maybe next time you could put a picture of the Condor.
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Well done for completing another Summer Learning Journey activity. Did you enjoy this task? I really like the background you have included in your DLO. I agree with Samantha, I also think some images would be a great addition to this DLO (remembering to attribute them). I'm a little confused by the third box, which writes "Condor is a common name for a type of bird call new world vouchers." You might need to revise this sentence so your readers can understand what you're trying to say. Also, the fact, "A male Condor can weigh up to 11 - 15 Kg's" has been repeated twice. A picture would be great way to show your readers what the Condor looks like. Do you know which country the Condor is native to?
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Hi Mehakpeet,
ReplyDeleteI like the detail you put into your work. Wow who new the Condor was so interesting. Maybe next time you could put a picture of the Condor.
keep on blogging
Samantha
Hey Samantha,
ReplyDeleteWell done for leaving a thoughtful comment on Mehakpreet's blog post. In order to receive the two bonus points, you need to engage with Mehakpreet's post with more detail. We ask you to write at least 3 full sentences about her post. You can add some more questions or descriptions in a reply comment to me. That way I can keep an eye on this post, and reward you with the points afterward.
Thanks,
Jordan
Hey Mehakpreet,
ReplyDeleteWell done for completing another Summer Learning Journey activity. Did you enjoy this task? I really like the background you have included in your DLO. I agree with Samantha, I also think some images would be a great addition to this DLO (remembering to attribute them).
I'm a little confused by the third box, which writes "Condor is a common name for a type of bird call new world vouchers." You might need to revise this sentence so your readers can understand what you're trying to say. Also, the fact, "A male Condor can weigh up to 11 - 15 Kg's" has been repeated twice. A picture would be great way to show your readers what the Condor looks like. Do you know which country the Condor is native to?
I look forward to reading more of your posts.
Thanks,
Jordan