Smart Relationships: Writing a quality blog comment

I was learning to write quality blog comments.

Christmas information

I was learning to write information about celebrations and I picked Christmas.
I learnt what is Christmas about.

Hockey

Hockey

we got into our teams we picked some defenders we got our game started we ran we jogged we passed and scored.  we defend so the ball doesn't score and gets a goal we run to the ball we spread out and be open to score.  I felt the excitement for the ball to score and the weather felt hot as the sun with the bright light from the burning sun. We make a great team to play again next time.

I was learning to write a little story about a time you played sports.