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Wednesday 10 January 2018

Summer learning journey plane

When I went in a plane I felt rally nervous because I HATE! getting travel sick it is the worst thing about planes I also feel scared encase are plane crashes it makes me really scared it also makes me scared when we have problem's with the plane.  I could hear mostly people talking in the begging of the plane and at the mostly people are really quiet.  





I wrote about how will I feel and I landed safely from a long trip.  

1 comment:

  1. Kia Ora Mehakpreet,

    Well done for completing yet another activity! You're doing such a great job.
    Thanks for telling us about how travelling on a plane made you feel; I can empathise with you, as I've travelled by plane a few times and each time I have a slight fear that something might go wrong.
    I like how you're still sticking to the theme of colours in your blog posts, ka pai Mehakpreet.

    However, this activity asks for you to write a short poem about the trip across the Tasman from Australia to New Zealand. If you need help writing the poem, you can follow this link:
    https://www.buzzle.com/articles/types-of-poems-for-kids.html

    Remember that poems don't always have to rhyme! All you need to do is write one that will give your readers an idea of how you felt on the journey. I know that you have done this by writing a short summary, but it would be great if you could attempt it in poetry.

    If you can do this, I'll be able to reward you with full points!

    I'll keep an eye on this blog post and see how you get on. If you need any help with writing your poem, please don't hesitate to ask me on here.

    Keep up the great pace,

    Cheers,

    Jordan

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