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Friday 19 January 2018

Summer learning journey Hairy Maclary

I finish the story off.
Out of the gate and off for a walk went Hairy Maclary from Donaldson’s Dairy

Hairy Maclary was gone for a walk with Donaldson it was a long walk but we suddenly came back said Donaldson and Hairy Maclary the dog had problem he kept growing hair (next day). Hairy Maclary woke up with even longer hair then Donaldson said we better figure this out after a walk (after walk) . Donaldson said so yesterday we went for a walk and ate then went to sleep hmm it might be the walk we will have to see tomorrow (next day). Hairy Maclary barked and said I HAVE MORE HAIR OH NO! and Donaldson said lets not go for a walk today and see if you hair grows longer in the next day told Donaldson to Hairy Maclary (next day). Hairy Maclary was dancing around in the morning and say I did not grow more hair said Hairy Maclary in happiness Donaldson screamed PROBLEM SOLVED.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Mehakpreet,

    Cadence here from the Summer Learning Journey team!

    An awesome story to read, so creative! I love how you changed it up to have Hairy Maclary growing hair uncontrollably, that made me laugh. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this creative story. Well done! I will be passing this on to Jordan! She will love this!

    I would love to know, why did Hairy Maclary’s hair become so out of control?

    Look forward to hearing from you soon!

    Cadence :)

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