So we had to pick our favorite food and write the recipe I don't know if it actually works I could not ask my parents because they are busy so I had to just do my best
Well done for mowing your way through another SLJ activity. I really love your presentation in this post— good job! Thanks for telling us about your favourite food, the McChicken cheese combo with no lettuce— and thanks for telling us how to make this meal. I like how you've listed the ingredients (including sauce), and then provided us with steps to making the burger. It's really important to make sure meat is properly cooked, especially chicken, so good job for telling your readers to cook it for a few minutes longer! What's your favourite drink to have with this meal?
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Hey Mehakpreet,
ReplyDeleteWell done for mowing your way through another SLJ activity. I really love your presentation in this post— good job!
Thanks for telling us about your favourite food, the McChicken cheese combo with no lettuce— and thanks for telling us how to make this meal.
I like how you've listed the ingredients (including sauce), and then provided us with steps to making the burger. It's really important to make sure meat is properly cooked, especially chicken, so good job for telling your readers to cook it for a few minutes longer!
What's your favourite drink to have with this meal?
I look forward to reading more of your work!
Cheers
Jordan