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Sunday, 7 January 2018

summer learning journey family facts


My Dad likes to play cricket and do swimming.
My grandma likes to watch tv and help make food.
My mum likes have family time and watch old
videos together.

I choose 3 people from my family and asked them 2


facts they like to do and that is what I wrote about.

3 comments:

  1. Hi Mehakpreet!

    Those are some fun activities! I like enjoying time with family too.

    Maybe you could add a short paragraph about some things you like to do as well.
    Don’t forget to make your blog “aesthetically pleasing”. That means, make it stand out by including creative photos and eye catching photos or you could even had links to videos you would like to share with other people.

    If you need any help adding photos or video, don’t hesitate to ask.

    Happy blogging!

    Cadence :)

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  2. i like how you showed what everybody in you family including you

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    1. Kia Ora Andrew,

      Well done for having a go at leaving a thoughtful comment on another student's blog post! If you can also leave a helpful suggestion for what Mehakpreet could do next time, I'll be able to reward you with 2 bonus points!

      Keep up the great commenting :)

      Jordan

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