For SLJ we had to watch this video and then write a little review about how was dance and what could they work on. But I want to know whats your review I wonder if it's similar to mine.
I like how you thought about your opinion and gave lots of insightful points both positive and negative. I actually watch the video silently because I didn't want to distract the other blog commenters so it looked quite funny to me without knowing what the music was doing.
I thought their dance was very well choreographed, meaning that they all performed close to perfectly in-sync with each other (and probably in time with the music, I couldn't tell). I agree that they could have more decorative clothing and I'm surprised and disappointed to hear that there was rude language in the music.
Well done again for completing the SLJ tasks and for leaving lots of good comments on other peoples blogs. I keep finding that you even beat me to comment on lots of the blog posts, which is fantastic :) , I'll have to try harder to match your speed.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hey Mehakpreet,
ReplyDeleteI like how you thought about your opinion and gave lots of insightful points both positive and negative. I actually watch the video silently because I didn't want to distract the other blog commenters so it looked quite funny to me without knowing what the music was doing.
I thought their dance was very well choreographed, meaning that they all performed close to perfectly in-sync with each other (and probably in time with the music, I couldn't tell). I agree that they could have more decorative clothing and I'm surprised and disappointed to hear that there was rude language in the music.
Well done again for completing the SLJ tasks and for leaving lots of good comments on other peoples blogs. I keep finding that you even beat me to comment on lots of the blog posts, which is fantastic :) , I'll have to try harder to match your speed.
Daniel :)