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Friday, 8 September 2017

Hockey

Hockey

we got into our teams we picked some defenders we got our game started we ran we jogged we passed and scored.  we defend so the ball doesn't score and gets a goal we run to the ball we spread out and be open to score.  I felt the excitement for the ball to score and the weather felt hot as the sun with the bright light from the burning sun. We make a great team to play again next time.
I was learning to write a little story about a time you played sports.

3 comments:

  1. Hi Mehakpreet,
    I like the way you told us how you guys spread ed out
    I learnt how you play hockey
    Next time you could make it more interesting By:Armika

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  2. hello mehakpreet i like the way that you told us how to play hockey
    next time you could put more writing about hockey.
    From: Aayet

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    1. Hello Aayet
      Next time I will try to put more writing in a new slide.
      Thanks from Mehakpreet

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