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Friday 22 March 2019

Blue land


Blue Land
On one blue sunny day when everything is blue like every other day. But there was a girl called Lily, this might be odd like everything else but she is the smartest girl on the planet Bloomey.  She lives with her parents, her big brother Max and her oldest sister Sera also lucky last her little sister Rose

One day they went shopping shopping and bought lots of art supplies and as you might know they are blue.  But it was Christmas in 3 weeks and they needed red and green supplies. “Mum!” yells Lily “yes honey” replies Mum “we need red supplies nut we have blue supplies like everything else” says Lily.  “Lily I think this seeing blue prank can stop” says mum. “I’m not lying I promise” says Lily “The supplies you bought are red and green, right Sera?” asks Mum. “Yea they are, is she going on about seeing everything blue again?” asks Sera “it is” cries Lily while running to her room.  Max comes running “what's all this racket? And where is dad?” asks Max. “Your dad is with Lily in her room” says Mum. “Ok” replies Max. “Sera I think we need to go to the doctor and check Lily's eyes” says Mum. “yea let's go now” replies Sera. “Mum,mum” says Rose “yes and please don’t say you need red and green supplies” says MUm “but we do their blue like everything else” says Rose.  “Get your sister and sit in the car” yells mum.

(In the car) “ Mum,mum where are we going” says Lily “to get red and green supplies,your so weird” says Rose.  “NO! We are going to the eye doctor and don’t talk to your sister like that” yells mum in anger. Lily and Rose start crying.  (At the doctors) “Can I have Lily and Rose please please” says Fhil. ‘Yes so what the problem?” asks Fhil. “We only see blue” says Lily and Rose.  “This is not funny so tell the truth” sighs Fhil. “I don’t know if this is a prank so just check their eyes” grumpily says Mum while sitting on a chair.  (After checking their eyes) “Ok I know this so we live on planet Bloomey and they imagine to see everything blue” says Fhil. “Yea carry on” says Mum “So they have blue glad wrap on their eyes” says Fhil while taking glad wrap off.  “We can see” surprisingly says Lily and Rose

For writing we had to write a narrative and I wrote a weird and crazy narrative I also learnt some vocabulary

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