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Wednesday, 3 July 2019

Stars and night sky

Date:18/6/19
Audience:Friends
Purpose:To rhyme


Stars and night sky
Stars, so nice and bright, shines like a light


 Night sky so dark, like wet bark


Sun shines just like a fire at the campsite


The moon has light and shines like the sun light


The six sisters you see them at noon and night they
shine so bright  We see the six sisters in June next to the moon


We see them high up in the sky waiting to say “hi”


Birds fly in the sky and try to say “hi”


People camp to see you and wait for the bright bright

When they see you they take out there mobile
and get prepared for a great smile 

I wrote a poem about the stars and night sky and it is based on Matariki and the six sisters and the one mother.  I used rhyme zone to help me find rhymes so it would be easier.  I learnt that there is six sisters and one mother not seven sister.

1 comment:

  1. It all rhymes.
    I like that it is about stars.
    I would like to know more about stars.

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