Hello Mehakpreet, My name is Bella and I am a year 6 student who attends to Papakura Central School, I'm pretty sure you may know me. Great Job! It's good to know that you learnt something new. Yours sincerely, Bella.
Kiora Mehakpreet, My name is Chimay from Waikowhai Primary School and I'm a year 5 student. I like the way you had a clear slideshow that showed what you had learned. Maybe next time you should think about adding more detail and less blurry pictures but apart from that I would love to see more of your great blog posts.
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Hello Mehakpreet,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Bella and I am a year 6 student who attends to Papakura Central School, I'm pretty sure you may know me. Great Job! It's good to know that you learnt something new.
Yours sincerely,
Bella.
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ReplyDeleteKiora Mehakpreet,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Chimay from Waikowhai Primary School and I'm a year 5 student. I like the way you had a clear slideshow that showed what you had learned. Maybe next time you should think about adding more detail and less blurry pictures but apart from that I would love to see more of your great blog posts.